When I first saw the word “Privacy” in the
title of the article, the first thing come in my mind is lost. This is a fast
developing society, everything developed so quick. You cannot stop it, so the
consequence is that we are leaking our personal information from time to time.
When you go to a clothes shop to buy something, the shop assistant will give
you a name card, or even ask you to give your personal information to become
the member in that shop. Therefore, I can get a lot of emails from different
shops. Every day, I need to delete the advertisements emails and try to find
the useful emails from them. Maybe for the first time, I think it is fine to do
such thing. However, for every day, this bothers me.
Nowadays, more and more websites require
you to sign in with your email address. Furthermore, you are free to register
and use the websites with your personal information. Privacy is leaking from
everywhere. This feel is just like that you are sold by others to make other
products. This is horrible.
When I write the essay 2, I think it is
hard for me to write the thesis statement. It just like stuck in my head. I do
not know how to organize my thesis statement well. In addition, the topic
sentence is also difficult for me to recognize.
I agree with the writer, the world just changes so fast. There are many possibilities to expose our personal information. As for me, I think the thesis statement could include the condensed points about the following essays.
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